The literary commentary is one of the two topics offered in the written portion of the preliminary French exam for the baccalaureate in France, along with the essay. This type of exam is also practiced, though with a stronger stylistic focus, in .
Formerly known as the commentaire composé or commentaire de texte, the literary commentary is, according to the French National Education curriculum, "the space for expressing a personal judgment on a text, using precise and relevant vocabulary that allows for its specific characterization." The purpose is to highlight the literary uniqueness of the passage under study through a rigorous method. Though it is a longstanding exam, it was more formally instituted in 1902.
The literary commentary is specific to exercises proposed in general and technological high school programs since 1972. Graded out of 20 points, it carries a coefficient of 5 in the baccalaureate for both tracks. It is an optional task for the written exam but mandatory for the oral, which takes the form of a line-by-line explanation, regardless of the student's academic track.
To begin, the commentary requires a careful and analytical reading of the excerpt provided. The student must develop a reading approach (that is, a relevant problem or question) that will organize the analysis around two or three main axes. The final piece must be rigorously structured, with an introduction, development, and conclusion.
This exercise draws on analytical and synthetic thinking, critical judgment, and argumentation skills. Always linked to the thematic units of the French program, it rewards a literary culture that is sensitive to grammatical, lexical, versification, or rhetorical techniques the author employs.
Since 1969, literary commentary has been one of the three possible topics in the written portion of the preliminary French exam for the baccalaureate in France, alongside the essay and, formerly, creative writing (écriture d'invention). Thus, it is an optional written task but a compulsory part of the oral exam. It is defined as "the space for expressing a personal judgment on a text, using precise and relevant vocabulary that allows for its specific characterization." The name of the exercise has evolved with changes in curricula and education reforms. It replaced one of the three formats of the "French composition" exam in 1969, was first officially titled commentaire de texte in 1972, became commentaire composé in 2002, and has been known as commentaire littéraire since 2006. The term commentaire de texte remains in use in philosophy exams, but the nature of that task differs: it involves analyzing one or more texts without using language-specific tools. In Quebec, a similar exam exists under the name épreuve uniforme de français.
The commentary must be based on a literary text, taken from a work studied in the curriculum (since 2006). However, "the candidate may also be asked to compare two texts." Additionally, since the 2002 reform, the task has always accompanied by a guiding question: "In general tracks, the student writes a structured paper presenting their interpretation and personal judgments. In technological tracks, the prompt is phrased in a way that helps guide the student in their work." The text to be commented on is generally limited to 15âÂÂ25 lines or one to two pages, especially for theatrical texts. After a set of preliminary observation questions, the instruction for the commentary is often very brief: "Write a literary commentary on this text." Today, the practice of literary commentary is often criticized for reducing the text and its literary value. Seen as overly technical, the exercise is said by critics not to allow for a personal or emotional interpretation of the passage.
Finally, "the commentaire composé is commonly practiced from high school through university, as well as in preparatory classes." In higher education, especially in literature programs, students are expected to produce "stylistic commentaries."
The word text is etymologically a "woven fabric" that brings together various linguistic and stylistic componentsâÂÂcomponents that the commentary must present. The primary goal of the commentary is to assess the student's mastery of all linguistic, stylistic, and literary history tools taught in secondary education. The objective is to apply these thematic units to a literary text to highlight its stylistic value. The student's ability to interpret the text within a specific context is also evaluated. Finally, it contributes to developing writing and oral communication skills (especially for the oral exam), which are part of the "
The commentary involves the explanation of a text that can belong to any genre (theatre, poetry, novel, press article, etc.), any type (argumentative, polemical, epic, narrative, poetic), or any literary period (Romanticism, Surrealism, etc.). The topic must always be tied to a thematic unit in the curriculum. It is a certificative assessmentâÂÂthat is, one that measures the student's ability to understand and reuse the curriculum's thematic tools, such as language tools, clarity of expression, knowledge of literary history, grammar, and terminology used in literary analysis. The official thematic units (as of the 2011 academic year) are:
These fields of study are mandatory. "Their list constitutes one of the essential contributions of the new curricula, which thereby indicate the foundations of the necessary and shared culture of high school students and future citizens."
The exam also evaluates the student's ability to organize, structure, and explain their text analysis, while identifying the issues it raises. The literary commentary is therefore built on two opposing yet complementary approaches that must be combined in a single production:
A linear reading is therefore prohibited; a so-called "juxtalinear" commentary does not highlight what makes the studied text "literary." According to Marcelle Dietrich, "textual explanation through identification" enables the combination of these two approaches, analytical and synthetic, offering an authentic way of reading the text.
The guidance document accompanying the curriculum describes the objectives of the literary commentary in the following terms: "The student is thus invited to analyze and understand a text and then to characterize it, to offer a judgment on this text based on the essential characteristics they have identified, and to justify this judgment with an argument founded on the precise analyses they have conducted: the formation of critical judgment and a respectful analysis of the text are the two main objectives." The literary commentary is therefore based on a specific method that enables the use of literary devices likely to highlight the author's style, as well as the issues inherent in the text and its context of production. Finally, the student must demonstrate neutrality and objectivity in both their argumentation and writing. According to Jacques Vassevière, commentary remains preferred by French teachers over the essay because of this dual methodological requirement.
"A keystone of French education in high school," the practice of commentary is acquired only in 11th grade (Première); it is the framework within which students can exercise their critical judgment. It should be addressed in every teaching sequence and must allow the reinvestment of language skills acquired. In 10th grade (Seconde), it is only introduced through "short and frequent exercises [which] develop creative writing, while also preparing students for commentary writing and the essay."
However, the exam differs depending on the educational track. For technological streams: "The wording of the commentary takes the form of two (or even three) questions that guide and map out a 'reading path.'" Unlike the literary commentary required in general education tracks, "It is not necessary to require the candidate to write standard transitions, an introduction, and a conclusion," even if logical coherence is still expected. In general education streams, "the commentary may take various forms of organization: a plan in two or three parts, or a more flexible elaboration of a movement that follows the construction of meaning." The final year of the literary track (Terminale littéraire) is the only one at this level that continues with the production of literary commentaries in a more in-depth manner.
The practice of literary commentary "reveals the dismay students feel toward an exercise perceived as complex, for which progressive learning is often abandoned." explains this by pointing to the lack of textbooks on the market specifically designed to help students. This absence contrasts with the overabundance of exam compendia, especially since the exercise engages various student attitudes and abilities. These include acquiring broad cultural knowledge, improving writing skills, engaging in a reflection that extends beyond the purely academic to consider the role of literature in learning French, and mastering metalanguage to refine writing and analysis (competencies that must all be invested in the exam exercise). However, these are scarcely studied by educational psychology, except for work by Isabelle Delcambre and B. Veck. The exercise also allows students to build expert reading skills, and according to Bertrand Daunay, it helps them "gradually form an image of themselves as readers, and break away from their perception of reading, of reading in school, of academic reading." The knowledge required falls into two categories: the "disciplines of the text" (linguistics, rhetoric, stylistics, semiotics, poetics) and literary history (as well as the humanities or history more broadly), while the skills involved are primarily writing-related.
Competences are activated within this exercise. Far from signaling an inability to analyze the text, paraphrasingâÂÂwhen it involves "the fusion of the commented text into the commentary through the (unmarked) incorporation of textual elements from the source text into the commentary" (what Bertrand Daunay calls "detextuality")â indicates a capacity to understand the text. In this regard, the exercises of commentary and summary belong to the same category, as they both engage in the same activity. Learning how to write a textual commentary ultimately offers students a broader reflection when faced with a text. It allows them to engage with the "literary asset," which, according to Yves Reuter, "is neither the text nor the commentary, but the relationship between the two, itself embedded within a specific field and the institutions connected to it." In this way, the literary text is desacralized through the practice of commentary, and the student can develop a critical distance toward it. Other transferable skills in French are also fostered by the commentary exercise, such as the student's ability to identify a difficulty in handling the text or to recognize genre-specific criteria. According to Isabelle Delcambre, the operation of relating these various forms of knowledge (concepts) and skills is specific to literary commentary.
The literary commentary is one of the optional written exams, lasting 4 hours and graded out of 20 points, with a coefficient of 5. The evaluation criteria are related not only to mastery of language and argumentation but also to a relevant personal reading, effective composition, and demonstrated sensitivity to the text. More specifically, the exam allows for the assessment of the following criteria:
From 2002 until 2021, the preliminary French exam in writing was based on a corpus of 3 or 4 texts (possibly on a short complete work), sometimes accompanied by an iconographic document.
In the oral portion of the preliminary French exam ("EAF") for all sections, including the literature baccalaureate for the literary track, the literary commentary is a mandatory component. In addition to evaluating reading comprehension and textual analysis, the exam also assesses the student's verbal communication skills. As such, the grading rubric used by teachers is based both on a methodical reading and analysis of the text and on the quality of the subsequent interview. The interview lasts 20 minutes, with a preparation time of 30 minutes. The coefficient is 2 for all general and technological streams (ST2S and STG), but 1 for the and streams. The presentation and the interview are graded out of 10 and then combined to form a score out of 20.
As in the written exam, the literary commentary in the oral exam consists of a textual analysis, which is chosen either from a reading list or from the groupings of texts studied during the year, and which the student has studied in class.
Consequently, three possibilities are available to the examiner, who remains the sole decision-maker:
However, the requirement level is lower than in the written exam, due to the limited time and the second part of the test, which consists of a semi-structured interview. In general, the proposed text does not exceed 15 to 20 lines, though it may be longer in the case of a theatrical excerpt. The oral is organized around a question posed by the examiner, which allows the student to structure their reading focus. There can be no textual analysis based on extensive reading texts (supplementary texts used during the interview), and in the case of a complete work, any excerpt may be proposed. It is essential that the student take into account the question asked and propose lines of interpretation accordingly. The grading rubric includes assessment of the candidate's skills in expression and communication, their reasoning and analytical abilities, and finally, their knowledge. These three areas are assessed twice: once during the textual presentation, and once during the interview. Lastly, special accommodations exist for repeating students or those coming from .
The exercise of literary commentary appeared with the ; since then, it has experienced increasing development to become one of the three major written components of the French baccalaureate.
However, there are similar and older forms of examination. According to Bertrand Daunay and Bernard Veck, "in its scholastic form, commentary is the result of a very ancient lineage that can be traced back to the Hellenistic period, when Homer was commented on both in schools and scholarly circles, notably Stoic ones." The preparatory exercises of Greek rhetoric (progymnasmata) and Roman rhetoric (declamationes), which evaluate students' analytical and synthetic abilities, are forerunners of the literary commentary exercise. Since the Middle Ages, the core of education was rhetoric, with students expected to produce a text by imitating a Latin or Greek author, rarely a French one, however. The quaestiones technique restricted the analysis to a short excerpt or a single proposition.
Nevertheless, critical and analytical study was non-existent until the 19th century. A Jewish traditionâÂÂthat of biblical commentariesâÂÂmust also be considered. According to Bertrand Daunay and Bernard Veck, the encounter between these two exegetical traditions took place in Alexandria and gave rise to medieval scholasticism, often considered as focusing on the works of Aristotle, following Thomas Aquinas, as objects of commentary.
Humanism later laid the foundation for the modern philological commentary, notably with Marc Antoine Muret's Commentary on Ronsard's Amours (1553), which is thus one of the first commentaries in France on a secular literary work, and which breaks with earlier forms of exegesis.
The written examinations of the baccalauréat were inaugurated in 1830 and officially adopted through the circular issued by Victor Cousin, addressed to rectors on May 8, 1840. This circular recommended the inclusion, in the oral explanation test, of "a certain number of texts from French classics, in prose and verse, which could be analyzed from a literary and even grammatical perspective (...)" With this circular, the rhetoric class ceased to be fundamental and was effectively abolished in 1902. The 1854 reform definitively confirmed the explanation of French authors, as the Ministry of Public Instruction realized that students had poor comprehension of classical texts. From then on, teachers were required to explain French texts to avoid misinterpretations, which involved careful reading and clarification of the stylistic and grammatical devices used. Through this test, the two traditionsâÂÂoral text explanation and written commentary (stemming from medieval scholasticism)âÂÂwere united.
The oral exercise appeared in 1874. The turning point in French education came in the 1880s when, as Michel Leroy notes, "the Republic founded the school on patriotic sentiment" through the . He adds: "The Latin discourse, the canonical exercise prepared for by the classes of grammar, humanities, poetry, and rhetoric, in a progression legitimized by long tradition, was replaced by French composition and the explanation of French texts." Lists of classical authors have thus been established and maintained to this day.
In the 19th century, the text commentary test competed with the literary composition exercise. Announced by Charles Thurot in his teaching at the ÃÂcole Normale in the 1870s, by the manuals of (in 1880) and Gustave Allais (in 1884), then by the campaigns of Ferdinand Brunot and Gustave Lanson (ÃÂtudes pratiques de composition française, 1898), text commentary was explicitly proposed by literary critic Ferdinand Brunetière in 1899 as an exercise allowing students to acquire knowledge of literary history and genres. In 1910, Dubrulle published a didactic work on what was then called "text explanation," a test that continued in its classical form until 1972. Dubrulle already proposed a precise method for analyzing texts, beginning with reading the text aloud, followed by its historical and social contextualization, and concluding with a technical explanation. Gustave Lanson, for his part, was the first to see text commentary as an exercise in metatextual discourse. The school examination was based on this new epistemological approach introduced by Lanson.
The second turning point occurred with the 1902 reform. With the modernization of author programs, a new discipline emerged: "French text explanation," which "became, from 1902, the main exercise in all classes," alongside composition, which became the "French dissertation." The text explanation focuses on the writer's style and his treatment of themes, with less emphasis on language tools.
The text commentary, which must be "composed," replaced one of the three forms of the "French composition" test in 1969. It was in this year that the baccalaureate exercises were gradually restricted to three subjects. Before this, the commentary was part of the "first subject," a double exercise that included a summary or analysis/discussion and a text commentary. Two other subjects were also possible in the baccalaureate: "a dissertation on a literary theme" and "a dissertation on an intellectual or moral theme." Within this new definition of the test-exercise, the literary commentary became a "metatextual activity." According to Bertrand Daunay and Bernard Veck, from 1970 onward, the test definitively combined the old requirements of oral explanation and written commentary: "the importance of accounting for a text in its progression," on one hand, and the rigor of construction designed to "methodically reveal the elements of interest that the candidate uncovers in the proposed page," on the other.
The literary commentary has been present in the baccalaureate in its current form and framework only since 1972. Initially, two texts are proposed for comparison, followed by a composed commentary of a single excerpt. The analysis must take into account language tools as well as stylistic devices. The commentary has, from the beginning, faced competition from the dissertation exercise: "The text commentary, accompanied by instructions outlining the method to follow, would not truly be proposed until 1902. The dissertation surpasses descriptions and narratives, speeches, and commentaries. Literary subjects gradually eclipse historical and moral subjects." The commentary exercise thus reflects the evolution of French teaching, which can be seen as: "The evolution from a pedagogy of imitation to a pedagogy of commentary," according to Michel Leroy. However, it was "as early as 1970 that the commentary was separated from the summary, with no specific explanation for this split." This led to a "generic rigidity," according to . The term "composed commentary" first appeared in the 1983 circular. The same year, a service note clarified the principles of the written baccalaureate exams and defined the specificity of each exercise. The introduction of methodical reading in the 1987 curriculum reinforced the literary and interpretative specificity of the test. The most recent curricula reaffirm this, but now refer to it as analytical reading.
According to Bertrand Daunay, "a clear dichotomy is marked between creative writing and metatextual writing," which refers to the literary commentary. This dichotomy includes the double opposition between rhetorical culture and commentary culture, as well as between metatextual writing and hypertextual writing. The commentary, in my own words from the 2001 Curriculum Guide, is an exercise that belongs "to the domain of critical discourse on literature." The commentary exercise suffers from the competition of creative writing, a less regulated and more free activity, and although these two exercises are close to one another in terms of the mobilization of knowledge and skills, there exists a "continuum between creative writing and metatextual writing."
Furthermore, the exercise encompasses several activities and formal variations. According to Bertrand Daunay, one can speak of a genre because "it is the prescriptions (and not the realizations) that gradually construct the genre" of the literary commentary, no longer as a simple school exercise, but as a unique production. Reflecting on the history of the literary commentary in French and literature education, Bertrand Daunay notes that two things have changed in its definition. First, linguistic, textual, or discursive characteristics are not always identified by official texts. Secondly, cognitive characteristics are the ones that have evolved the most between the various explanations of the exercise. This evolution must be compared with that of the reading practice within the French educational system, which has also been reshaped since 1969.
The axes of the commentary are based on theses or ideas determined by its reading. These ideas rely on arguments referring to literary and writing techniques specific to the text to be commented on and studied in class. At this level, being a literary analysis, it is important to use the appropriate vocabulary and terminology, employing a range of synonyms and using precise adjectives, particularly by resorting to the lexicon of feelings and that of abstraction. For instance, knowing the names of stylistic figures is essential, with any correction partially based on knowledge of both the name and function of the techniques covered in the curriculum. Manipulating various techniques (grammatical, lexical, stylistic, linguistic, etc.) and the need to establish and identify relationships between textual phenomena at different linguistic levels constitute the didactic difficulty of the literary commentary exercise.
A literary commentary thus uses "analysis tools" that must be reintegrated depending on the specificity of the text to be analyzed and the educational track followed. The use of a precise method, for example, based on categorization through tables or the use of colors, helps improve text analysis.
The study of a text is based on a set of linguistic tools capable of bringing out its style and originality. The study of lexical fields and semantic fields is fundamental to highlight the themes of the passage, notably through literary isotopies. The play on polysemy or paronymy also allows for semantic perspectives. Studying adjectives (both evaluative and pejorative) and those reflecting the enunciative framework (particularly axiological adjectives) is crucial.
Etymology should also be identified, although this aspect requires a deep knowledge of the evolution of the language, which Latin scholars are often the only ones capable of applying. The study of enunciation is increasingly required in curricula. It concerns how the author presents themselves within their text and makes it an object of communication. The study of discourse and speech acts (reported speech, free indirect discourse, indirect speech, and direct discourse) is crucial in the case of a narrative alternating between dialogue and narration. Finally, the study of the registers and literary tonalities of the language used in the text (comedic, lyrical, epic, fantastic, etc.) connects the text to a genre and a literary movement covered in the curriculum.
Draft identification has helped highlight the subjects of sentences, the interplay of complements (direct object, indirect object, object of the preposition), and the nature of the verbs used by the author (action verbs, movement verbs, perception verbs, state verbs, attributive verbs). Coordinators must be identified (, , or conjunctive phrases) because they reveal the logical progression of the text, especially in the case of an argumentative excerpt.
The author employs formal techniques that define their style and highlight their ideas and themes. Stylistic and rhetorical figures help determine the effects the author aims to produce on the reader. The study of focalization viewpoints shows how the author (or narrator) involves and energizes their text. The study of argumentation, a key focus in the curriculum, should be done by shedding light on the literary registers and the external context of production.
Although most prevalent in the poetry analysis, rhythmic and prosodic techniques also exist in prose texts. Identifying these elements helps clarify the internal dynamics of the passage, its strength, and its originality as a literary and cultural object. The versification must be precise: counting syllables and vers, considering hiatuses, caesurae, hemistichs, enjambments, and other elements are essential to link the excerpt to a specific genre or literary movement.
The study of stylistic figures specific to poetic rhythm, such as alliteration and assonance, is part of the curriculum. The study of punctuation and typography (paragraphs, poetic stanzas) is also included. The study of versification, specific to poems, primarily focuses on identifying the type of poem (sonnet, rondeau, ballad, etc.) and the meter type (alexandrine, octosyllabic, etc.). The study of rhymes (alternating, crossed, or flat) and, if applicable, the graphic design for image poems (e.g., calligrams) should also be completed. The study of prosody allows one to account for the unique rhythm of the text (concepts of period and cadence).
The commentary must highlight the understanding of the specific issues of the text being studied. Defining the issuesâÂÂor "reading axes"âÂÂhelps determine the type of structure. However, simply following the text is not enough: one must also draw upon their own general knowledge to enrich the study, demonstrate argumentative skills, and reintegrate the objects of study from the curriculum.
The literary commentary has a dual didactic contract: it is an exercise that involves both writing and reading. Regarding the writing of literary commentaries in high school, Dominique Bucheton identifies four writing approaches, which he calls "commentary behaviors": "the impossible takeoff," "exploring like a maverick," "the diligent student," and "maximum distance and integration." Since the commentary exercise is inherently metatextual, writing and reading strategies are closely interconnected. The learning challenge, in this case, is for the student to acquire a "scriptural image," a concept that "refers to the close relationship between the two activities, and the great difficulty, sometimes, especially in the analysis of metatextual writings such as commentaries, of determining whether what is being analyzed belongs to the realm of writing or the staging of reading practices and relationships to the read text." This scriptural image encompasses the text reception and the student's cultural knowledge.
Understanding the text, through careful and analytical reading, "based on the rigor and rationality of positive observation," is central to the exercise. Within the discipline of teaching literature, the literary commentary constitutes a "unique mode of grasping and appropriating the text, through selections (quotations) subjected to reasoned study, the goal of which is ultimately to provide a "literary" reading of the text."
The "study of argumentation and its effects on recipients" lies at the heart of the literature curriculum, alongside the development of critical judgment. The circular outlining the 2006 curriculum adds that mastering the main forms of argumentation (especially deliberation) is specifically the focus for the classes of Première and Terminale, across all series.
However, the commentary should not simply be a catalog of knowledge acquired in class. The student must also argue and demonstrate sensitivity to the text and, more generally, to literature and the arts. The official bulletin of November 2, 2006 (No. 40) explains the importance of this critical dimension:
In this sense, the literary commentary, according to ÃÂlisabeth Bautier and Jean-Yves Rochex, is a "personal space for thought and analysis," a "construction of an experience of the world and language" for .
A literary commentary cannot be written without acquiring a minimal level of general and literary culture; it must, within the limits of the text, serve as an opportunity to present one's knowledge in order to enrich the study through understanding the context of its writing, knowledge of the author's biography, and by drawing parallels with historical and social events.
In itself, the literary commentary, like the dissertation, is an exercise where the cross-disciplinarity of knowledge and its relationship to other subjects is paramount, an objective of the National Education system to break down subject silos. The Bulletin officiel No. 40 of 2006 specifies these transdisciplinary expectations: